Wednesday, September 23, 2020

Golden Shovel Poem

 3. Introduce the "Golden Shovel Poem" and Terrance Hayes

From Writer's Digest: Golden Shovel: Poetic Form By: Robert Lee Brewer | June 24, 2014 Earlier this year, I came across a mention of the “golden shovel” form created by Terrance Hayes and made a note to check it out. I’m so happy I did, because it’s a fun poetic form. HERE ARE THE RULES FOR THE GOLDEN SHOVEL: Take a line (or lines) from a poem you admire. Use each word in the line (or lines) as an end word in your poem. Keep the end words in order. Give credit to the poet who originally wrote the line (or lines). The new poem does not have to be about the same subject as the poem that offers the end words. If you pull a line with six words, your poem would be six lines long. If you pull a stanza with 24 words, your poem would be 24 lines long. And so on. If it’s still kind of abstract, read these two poems to see how Terrance Hayes used a Gwendolyn Brooks poem to write the first golden shovel: We Real Cool, by Gwendolyn Brooks (original poem) The Golden Shovel, by Terrance Hayes (golden shovel poem) As you can see, the original golden shovel takes more than a line from the poem. In fact, it pulls every word from the Brooks poem, and it does it twice. This form is sort of in the tradition of the cento and erasure, but it offers a lot more room for creativity than other found poetry. ***** Workshop your poetry! HERE’S MY ATTEMPT AT A GOLDEN SHOVEL: “Aging Well,” by Robert Lee Brewer -after Basho as translated by Allen Ginsberg The funny thing about growing old is you never know how to respond until after the fact. Like a frog that sits and then eventually jumps there’s absolutely no thought given to the process. You’re young; then, kerplunk! https://ypn.poetrysociety.org.uk/workshop/what-is-a-golden-shovel-with-peter-kahn/ www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/golden-shovel-poetic-form https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/55678/the-golden-shovel https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/articles/92023/introduction-586e948ad9af8 4. Write a Golden Shovel poem: Resources: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/resources/learning/core-poems?page=4 HOMEWORK: Create a "Golden Shovel poem" for Friday workshop

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